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Fallen Lolita by SweetMonia Fallen Lolita by SweetMonia
It has been long since I last uploaded a picture of Lolita, but I have been practicing drawing her lately, and this is one of the pictures I drew :3

Isn't she cute? :3
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Critique by Zenerzec Zenerzec/critique/1310878210">Nov 5, 2015, 4:32:55 PM
I may be gone for a long time, but I'm still up to giving critiques when needed, and I see some things that you need to improve on.

#1, The legs

They seem a bit, inhuman, the legs kinda curve unnaturally, try and study other anime/manga artists to see about how they form the body

#2, The shading

I can see that the drawing looks like a sketch, but the thing is, I can't seem to determine how far every part is

And lastly, #3, The eyes

I like how cute she looks, but the eyes kinda lack a bit of detail. I see that you somewhat fabor the shoujo style (correct me if I'm wrong, it's been a while ^^;) and so I recommend you to do what point #1 is.

Over all, good work, just keep practicing, you'll get there
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