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Submitted: December 7, 2012
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Sweet Mihokoby *SweetMonia

Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Paintings

Here I draw Mihoko again, I quite like that character^^

Critique by ~ALegendIsBorn Mar 22, 2013, 9:14:20 PM

Hi there!

This is my first time writing a critique. I hope you don't get offended.

First, let's go to the positives. I like her hair and her dress, especially the way the dress is colored. I love how you shade because I don't know how to shade. I also love how you shaded her skin

and those tiles she is standing on. Those are so cute~

Now let's go to the negatives. Of course all of us need to improve, even me, since I'm a beginner.

The thing that first bothered me was about her feet. I think that it is a little bit big. The second thing that bothered me was her eyes. I know that your art style is anime/manga, but the way you did everything else looks realistic, so yeah, that kinda bothered me.

The third thing that bothered me was the pose her legs are doing. I think that it is out of proportion, but don't worry. I have problems like those every time I draw full body. "orz

But anyways, everything is nice. and I hope you still don't get offended. I hope that this critique helps/helped, and may God bless you

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Critique by ~MajorAwsomeness Feb 18, 2013, 5:41:32 AM

This is very good. Looks 3-D.I like the details the colour choise and the background. What program do you use. The tiles on the ground have my favorite colour in it I am raiting you 20/20 stars. The shadow of the fence on the tile on the ground. But I think your missing her shadow.Now the background. The back ground looks some thing like the MMD backgrounds.The 3-D background. All in all she looks like one of my charaters.As I say again 20/20 stars. I like the Eye colour. This is very impressiave in mt opinion. Thanx 4 reading my review.